(Oreimo Fanfict) My friend can't be this much into BDSM

Tittle is actually was chosen just to make it easier to recognise. But Kirino will only occasionally appear in this. As I plan to write this from Kuroneko and mostly Ayase narration. Thought of Kuroneko as main narrator at first, but her chunii language is too difficult to mimic.

Of course it's fanfic, so it's self-pleasured really. But i always want to fantasize about Ayase story and her sudden BDSM relationship with Kuroneko. And how she comes to term with them and so on. Like Kirino and otaku fandom in the original novel really. I also want mentioning the Kousaka siblings as side character, just to fantasize about how their life will work out from the semi-open LN/anime ending. Two birds one stone really

Few key points:

• not a literature guy. Always want to write a story but my writing is not up to par. Since my mind often run wild with fantasy so think a light novel format probably will help me going. Have to start from somewhere right?
• interest in, but know little knowledge about real BDSM in general, once again hopefully writing this will give me an incentive to start looking into it
• the focus will be on Ayase and Kuroneko relationship, with a bit of subtext~ish depending how it goes. But that would means neither of them will be in any other romantic relationship with anyone else
• I am generally very open-minded. So if you have any feedback/ suggests on anything: plot devices, grammar, uses of words, please be frank but kind on me. I am rereading and fixings it as it goes as well. Also as nature of the fanfict, i think charterer will tends to be OOC. But i still want to keep them relatively as similar to the novel as they could, personality wise and the way they talk. The writing format as well. Those familiar with the novel maybe could point me out a better use of words/ lines. Especially Kuroneko Chunii talk

Let's just start:

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Originally Posted by Prologue "You guys did WHAT yesterday?" Kirino stood up while slammed both her hands on the coffee table. But as she started to notice the bystander crowd gathering eyes on her. She made a small cough to hide her embarrassment while slowly sat back into her seat. "It's.... it's not like that, Kirino" I muttered Still had eyes with burning flame on me, and without diverting them away , Kirino pointed her finger toward Kuroneko. Who still slowly slip on her drink next to me, as if it was not even her concern. "But... she told me that you did call that cat 'Mistress', while she did THAT to you..." I instinctively kept my head down while glance to Kuroneko seeking for help. She saw my pleading but pretends not to notice. Of course, it's me being scolded by Kirino right now. Damn that girl. I should have killed her when i got the chance Sigh. Where should I begin this story with... ........................................

Spoiler for Chapter 1:

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It's a warm day in April. I was sitting next to Kuroneko in one of those family restaurant booths, and opposite to us was our dearest friend Kirino. It was our first time catching up with Kirino since we started entering college. She was busy with settling in new life after moving out of her family home.... To chase after onii-san.... Who is currently in his final year at her enrolled college. And while they all acted casual about the fact that she gonna move in with him, and how the two constantly deny it. I think everyone includes the father and mother already had a vague ideas about the nature of their relationship. But disregarding all that, we all were happy for Kirino. She put on a tough front, but I know she was totally devastated in the first several months after seeing him moved to another city for college. And it would take her a full year before things could get back on track for her. Even then, the only time I saw her truly smiling is whenever she showed me an onii-san message or whenever we could all find a time to catch up, which is rare by itself. Especially during our final year. And while the sorrowed Kirino has her own adult charm, I'm just glad that my Kirino has shined like a sun again. About me, well...... "I already knew that something was fishy when you allowed that cat to move in with you, Ayase. Why do you guys have to keep hiding your forbidden relationship from me..." "You...". That ticked Kuroneko off. "Don't lump Ayase's pure intention to your brocon. Not everyone is shameless enough pretending to share an apartment, while actually turning it into a love nest." "Wha.... What are you.... talking about.....". That was effective as Kirino started leaning back, with a stunned look on her face, blushed red and only could mutter back some broken sentences. She was still pretending to us that she and oniisan had already turned back to normal siblings. How adorable, Kirino ♪. "She was only moving in with me to save on rent, that's all. You have to believe us, Kirino." That's the truth through. We don't talk about it. But Kuroneko family doesn't do as well as ours. And unlike Kirino we both were going to the same university. So when I realised how she can only afford a shabby place, and how far she has to travel everyday for university and for her part-time job. I had suggested her to move into my apartment since I would need a roommate anyway... Not to mention it would save me the time travelling whenever it's my turn to come to her place. And there's hardly any privacy over there. And the bedroom and bathroom were tiny.... "But Ayase, would a normal roommate TIE YOU UP with rope, and asked you to call her "mistress"? " And that I have no defense of. It all started with Kirino accidentally seeing the rope mark on my neck , and Kuroneko stupidly blurted out the detail. That girl couldn't keep her mouth shut. "We were only testing the suitability of our sacred ceremony toward the Dark Realm...." She was making it sounds even worse. "Ku....Kuroneko. Stop confusing her.... Wait, Kirino. Let's me explain" Kirino gave a 'go-ahead' sign, patiently folded her arms but still with a clear distrust expression. As I was taking time to pick out correct words "You know I and Kuroneko has a special way to 'communicate', yes? "Yeah, and...?" "During our last Comiket. Because we could not go due to the exam. So Saori brought me some books." "It...it was... some... BDSM doujins. And she was teasing us about how it will be a good reference for our 'communication'." "So we were just testing it out to prove that our ceremony was not as vulgar as in that book." Added Kuroneko Kirino close her eyes, has her finger on her head like she was struggling to compute all that. Before pointed it to Kuroneko. "Then how did you go from allowing Ayase to step on your stomach to agreeing on tying her up?" "......." Right. Since last time being caught by her a few years back. We had been much more careful whenever we 'communicate' with each other. So Kirino had always been assuming that that's all we did. And while it's true that I am responsible for about 40% of all those new acts. It's that M slave's fault for accepting whatever I proposed. Kuroneko's silence and inability to response is like a testimony for all of suspicion in Kirino's head. That damn useless girl. Oh I so wished that it's my turn today. So later on, I can direct all of these frustrations toward her. "Oh well, whatever. Just tell me whenever you guys are ready to come out" she stood up, left money for her bill and prepared to leave "Kirino...." I planned to further protest. But as we were just digging up a deeper hole at every turn. It's probably better just to change the topic. "....when are you going to meet onii-san?" "In 15 minutes, at 4:00. I have to buy a couple of kitchenware. And that guy just bought a car, so he can help to carry them home" "So you often drive with him?" "Only some time, that useless guy's too busy right now applying for a job. So we couldn't plan for any long trip." I think she just blurted out something dangerous right there. "Let's go too Ayase. We still need to buy groceries before the shop closes" "Yes, mistre...." In that instance, I wanted to kill myself. As I slowly turned toward Kirino. What faced me is her business fake smile that i was so familiar with. The room temperature was dropping down to sub-degree. As my body started to uncontrollably shiver "I...I... Really have to go" She turned her back on us and muttered those few words as she walked away. But after made a few steps toward the door. She suddenly stopped, turned her head showing a great sympathy in her eyes, and said with a bittersweet smile. "Don't do it too hard, ok? Ayase? Still, no matter what, you will always be my dearest friend" And walked straight out of the family restaurant door. I instinctively reached my arm toward her, but no words could come out. Next to me Kuroneko was also speechless, but with an embarrassed blush on her cheeks If I kill Kuroneko right now. Would this misunderstanding be resolved...? ..................Ended of chapter 1........................

Spoiler for Unfinished chapter 2 - probably need lots of feedback on Kuroneko chu2:

I am known as Kuroneko, a great servant of Dark Lord Asthely .

Wielding extraordinary power and command thousands of demons over both realms.

But right now my soul is in peril of being devoured by even a darker and more sinister adversary

Or let me put it so even you mortals could understand.

Like me, my friend and roommate isn't a normal person by all account. But she had been showing an even stranger side since leaving that family restaurant.

From the time we arrived home until this instance, with both eyes void of soul, she had been standing in the kitchen next to the chopping board. And chopped down pretty much any vegetables she could grab from our grocery bag.

As I was sitting in the couch pretending to read one of her magazine while observe the situation. Occasionally i could catch a glimpse of her starring directly toward me with cold dead eyes, while slowly hold the kitchen knife even higher above her head. Then chop down with all the forces in the universe.

We took turns for cooking, and it's her day today. Normally I would have helped out whenever I am home early from my part time job. But the sixth sense inherited form my loyal familiar telling me not to stand around her right now.

Frankly I am truly terrified to be even this close.

But I could not leave my friend,and also a comrade life force to be depleted away and corrupted by her own inner dark force.

Since our first meeting. I have realised that this girl is different with all of us. Because under her pretense as a servant of justice, she was hiding a dark and powerful layer of miasma that even I was overwhelmed by. And while it was sealed and suppressed by her bloodline guardians. It did not take me long to tap in that power and returned her to her true nature

Yes she is Dark Angel Ayase. A great partner and a true comrade of mine.

But right now her massified miasmas will kill us both if I can't defuse or suppress it.

Should I call Kirino asking for help. Kirino normally could put a temporary suppression onto this child

No, the current situation is too volatile. And that airhead tend to blurt out things from eroge which could worsen everything. Like what happened this afternoon

I have to take matter into my own hand. Only I can diffuse this matter.

Firstly the process to release and neutralise some of those dark miasma.....

"Hey, Ayase.... do you want to continue yesterday ritual after dinner?"

The chopping sounds got louder and sharper.

A sweat slowly rolling down my cheek. Strange, it's freezing in here.

"How's about we skip my turn and start with yours today ?"

"......"

I take that as a yes

(Oreimo Fanfict) My friend can't be this much into BDSM